"DEATH?" An acrostic poem? - the black death acrostic poem
Give me your honest opinion.
Death?
Drop gently into the knee
Ah, the smell of the earth.
The thinning of the grass and bees buzz
She looked at my birth.
Everything fades
Remember that I must go.
Ultimately, what's new
You have to help push things.
All was quiet in the black
A thread of thought remains.
Many of these titles have come
I am freeing myself of my chains.
Wait to do nothing but
Enough time to clear my head.
You have not thought of hate;
Outside the lights begin to glow.
Turn the darkness into the light.
The empty spaces are filled with life.
Monday, February 1, 2010
The Black Death Acrostic Poem "DEATH?" An Acrostic Poem?
5 comments:
decent I'm not an expert at guessing what is in my opinion
Verses which express, really specific points or nothing, no picture is really not surprising all
Case actually seems completely random places is not the question of poetry in general.
its cool u had, as always at home parent does not explain sorta series tie .. But for a better identification of the lines and make the rest of the poem less arbitrary.
My teacher always tells me that every word has a meaning and there is a reason good poetry Added
im sorry and tries to help make suggestions for improvements ... Trying not to be rude cuz its a good start IMO
u can not be better if people say that only "good job" u know. thats what they say, the pictures of my battle, I hope u dont take my advice and how worng sorry if some of them stupid, as I have said an expert
I like. It is easy to read and would like to read more. Can you please help me please with me.
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ...
I like the message on the page ..
I also like the question mark after the word "death". I think that is important.
GOOD! : D
Well ......... and very well done!
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